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Escape by =analillithbar:iconanalillithbar:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Open


      My armor drags me down,
All bulk and weight,
Encumbering the escape.
      Is my shell, flesh?  
Are my shields proving to be,
The ball and chain that binds me?
      If escape requires,
The relinquishing of these ties,
Then let me strip,
From the delicate core,
That which would hinder,
      Naked Spirit's Escape.
©2009 =analillithbar
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~jknatel Jul 15, 2009, 8:58:34 AM
simply beautiful. Every line is priceless

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=analillithbar Jul 15, 2009, 9:03:28 AM
Thank you So Much for the comment, but mostly the read!! :love:

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~jknatel Jul 15, 2009, 9:06:25 AM
My pleasure :). I'm sure you'll like this website [link]
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=analillithbar Jul 15, 2009, 9:29:12 AM
I tried to go there but my computer shut me down... bad jojo... :laughing: Thanks though!

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~MoreaGaara Jul 15, 2009, 9:29:24 AM
wow, another one that reminded me of belial...

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Tyrael: Yes. Keep doing it.

It is an absolute truth that all truth is relative.

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=analillithbar Jul 15, 2009, 9:45:58 AM
Glad that it's resounding with you... If you would like to add any of these to your work, please, feel free. In fact, I'd be honored.

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~MoreaGaara Jul 15, 2009, 9:48:28 AM
about that, i'll have to see...:D but the only poet is Evenstar. maybe in the later chapters.

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I say "thanks for the fave" by faving.

Diablo: Is it fratricide if it happens in a video game?
Tyrael: Yes. Keep doing it.

It is an absolute truth that all truth is relative.

"I wuv fragments. They are awesomeness on a stick!!" =Artheeria
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=analillithbar Jul 16, 2009, 6:21:04 AM
I figured I'd just go ahead and give you license, just in case. :)

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~MoreaGaara Jul 16, 2009, 6:22:30 AM
i will bear that in mind. :) thank you.

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I say "thanks for the fave" by faving.

Diablo: Is it fratricide if it happens in a video game?
Tyrael: Yes. Keep doing it.

It is an absolute truth that all truth is relative.

"I wuv fragments. They are awesomeness on a stick!!" =Artheeria
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