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Natural Point-of-View

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Sharpie Marker and Acrylic Paint on 11 x 14 stretched canvas.

From the "Haleigh N. Chapin" Collection, Fayetteville, N.C.


:D
Image size
2577x1980px 5.3 MB
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Can anyone tell me what the hell "vision" means on a critique? This one should get 20/20 I guess haha. Anyways.
Very cool concept on this. The drawing itself is good but it lacks depth. You need to use shading and darker colours. I can see you kind of using highlights but they are all over the place, you need to have a light source in mind when shading and highlighting. Do some studies on light ^^ Right now it looks vivid and bright but too flat. Try looking at pictures of plants and see the texture they have and try and reproduce it.

I also think it would be more effective if it were zoomed out a bit. Where the flower cuts out on the left is kind of awkward since it's right before you can see the stem, so it kind of looks like a blimp with the back exploding instead of a flower hehe well in the thumbnail.
So, changing perspective so we could see the stem might help with that.

Conceptually this is really cool, like the title too.

Best